How To Use Transition Words

Hello Everyone!

I just read this amazing post about using different transitional words. Do you and your kids often use “first, second, and third,” when explaining things in reports or essays? Read this post and try out some of these tips!

Enjoy the article!

http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/how-to-use-transition-words

Looking for Christmas Gifts? Look No Further!

For anyone looking for Christmas gifts for their families, please check out my publisher’s website! They’re having some amazing sales right now on lots of different toys (including rubber band guns, wooden swords, and more!), books that will build up and encourage your whole family, and audio books that are inspiring and help make long car trips more enjoyable. :-) My books are also on sale now, too! You can even buy a combo pack of my first book, “A Cry From Egypt,” my second book, “A Stand At Sinai,” and my radio theater production of “A Cry From Egypt” for $10 off it’s usual price! And the books and the radio theater are on sale if you buy them individually, as well.

Click on the link to find my books and other links to their products! And have a very Merry Christmas! :-)
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Do You Know the Difference?

I just stumbled across this amazing article about words that are spelled similarly or have similar meanings. Do you know the different between “Affect” and “Effect”? “Compliment” and “Complement”? “Cite/Site/Sight”? There are so many! Get a quick and helpful grammar lesson here! I always get “affect” and “effect” mixed up. :-)

http://www.grammarly.com/blog/2015/25-homophones-that-most-spell-checkers-wont-catch/?utm_source=next

Writer’s Retreat! August 3rd-7th! Calling All Writers!!

Hello Fellow Writers!!

I’m leading a Christian Writer’s Retreat for writers ages 13-25 in the mountains of Tennessee just next week!! We’ll get there on August 3rd (Monday) and leave around lunchtime on August 7th (Friday)! This is a retreat geared towards young writers who need inspiration, accountability, help with plot and editing, information about publishing, or just time away to write! We’ll also be focusing on how to write quality books that also bring glory to God and talk about the many different ways to do that. I’m leading the retreat with newly published authors John Stephens and Emma Curtis, who are also homeschooled students! The retreat will be held at Cherokee Cove in the beautiful mountains of Tennessee. Cherokee Cove is a Christian retreat center with bunk houses and some of the best food you have ever tasted! It’s going to be a time of great encouragement, education, writing, and fun! Here’s a link with more information. I hope to see many of you there!! :-)

http://www.cherokeecove.org/writers-retreat/

Then and Than

Here’s a fun grammar tip for you! It was only a year or two ago that I finally got the difference between “then” and “than” straight! Grammar is important! :-)

http://www.grammarly.com/blog/2015/then-vs-than-why-one-letter-matters/?sf&utm_campaign=Blog_Augment_1&utm_source=Facebook_org&utm_medium=social&utm_content=link_post

Then vs. than. They are not the same.

Descriptive Writing Exercise!

Is school work and/or writing getting a little hard as the weather gets warmer and Summer seems to be rapidly approaching? Try this fun descriptive writing exercise to take a break from the routine but still teach a better way to write! Look at the picture below:

There are several different methods we can use to describe this picture. We can describe the picture from left to right, top to bottom, or from the center outward. Let me show you three examples:

Left To Right:

“In a blur of rainbow colors, the train speed away down the track, not even pausing for a break on the way to its destination. The tattered advertisements on the walls were covered up for a brief moment as the train raced along. The roar of noise echoed through the tunnel and bounced off of the white tile floor and concrete walls. The man walking closest to the track barely seemed to notice the noise as he headed towards his next stop to wait, determination in his stride. Others walked slowly besides him, underneath the white florescent lights, trying to stay out of the way. A few paced the floor, the tap of their shoes only heard once the train left the station. It was the monotonous day’s commute. Trains racing too and fro, people standing with their backs up against the wall, waiting. Others rushing about in a desperation to make their connecting trains. No one was really friendly. It was just a sea of faces doing what they did every single day of their lives.”

Top To Bottom:

“Bright white lights shone on the white concrete ceiling and walls, making the underground train station appear unnaturally bright and almost hostile. Some of the commuters squinted a little as they watched the train race past. People hugged their coats to themselves as they made their way to their appropriate stops. The tunnel was a less than a warm and friendly atmosphere, but one that everyone was used to. The hustle and bustle of tons of moving feet on the dirty tile floor made a constant shuffling noise as everyone tried to stay out of each other’s way.”

Center And Out:

“A man with a heavy coat and a backpack slung over one shoulder walked quickly through the station. The train rushed past him in a whirl of noise and color, but he scarcely noticed as he looked down the long, bleak tunnel full of harsh light. No one really noticed anyone as they made their way along. He was vaguely aware of the people on his left that were standing and waiting, or pacing back and forth, or slowly following him to the next train stop. That’s all the mattered. Getting wherever you had to go quickly and getting out of the bleak and lonely tunnel and back to work.”

Do you see how every time I tried a new descriptive style the subject of the paragraph changed? The first paragraph (left to right) had the subject as the train because that’s what was seen/described first. The second paragraph (top to bottom) had the subject as the whole atmosphere of the train station with the focus being derived from the harsh light. The third paragraph (center and outward) had the subject being the man with the backpack and showed things from his perspective.

Go over these different ways of describing pictures with your children and show them the difference. Make sure they use as many big and expressive words as they can! Use a thesaurus if it would help!

Happy writing! :-)

Writing Tips for Young Struggling Writers

Hello Everyone!

I found this great link with writing suggestions for young writers who don’t like writing or who simply struggle to get their thoughts on paper. My parents used some of these with me when I was younger, and they really helped! I hope this is beneficial to you and your children!

http://simplehomeschool.net/authentic-writing/

Are We Like The Israelites?

I was reading a devotional on “Trust” this week, and found this post about anxiety and how it affects our trust in God. And then it linked that all back to the Israelites wandering around in the desert, which is what I’m writing about right now… So I wanted to share it with you all! I hope it’s an encouragement to you as it was to me!

“The underlying source of our anxiety – most, if not all, of it – is unbelief in God and a corresponding unwillingness to follow Him. That’s what the author of Hebrews was getting at in his letter. The Old Testament Israelites, about whom he was writing, had God’s presence to guide them by day and by night; they had all the food they could possibly need miraculously provided in the manna that God rained down from heaven, and they had the guarantee of God’s protection. Despite all this – God’s presence, provision, protection, and promises – the Israelites were constantly fearful about what might go wrong. As a result they were unable to find the heart rest that was available to them every moment. The author of Hebrews didn’t think it necessary to point out how hard it was for the Israelites to cope with life in the wilderness; instead he laid the source of their inability to enjoy peace squarely on their unbelieving hearts.

“If we would only believe that what is right here for us – life with the God who protects and provides – is sufficient, we would quickly discover that we have no need to seek our fulfillment anywhere else.” – Lydia Brownback

 

Great Writing Tips!

While researching some ways to improve my own writing, I found this awesome article with writing tips! Thirty-four authors and article writers put these together and some of them are so helpful! I hope this benefits your own writing as well as it has benefited mine! :-)

http://www.dailywritingtips.com/34-writing-tips-that-will-make-you-a-better-writer/

Underwater Ancient Egyptian City Discovered!!

This is soooo cool! A ton of new artifacts from Ancient Egyptian has been found…. UNDERWATER! It’s a whole lost city! And all of these neat artifacts are being brought up to the surface for research! I can’t wait to read more about this. :-) I hope you enjoy this new discovery as much as I have!

http://boredomtherapy.com/ancient-sunken-city-thonis-heracleion/